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Lucky StAR 1 by SymbianL Lucky StAR 1 by SymbianL
Here's the first page of my "Lucky StAR" comic.

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commissioned by "Mikewolfskin" :)
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:iconmikotowolfskin:
First of all, I'd like to say that this is seriously charming! I love the behavior you placed into the characters because it matches the fashion of Lucky Star quite well.

I like the amount of details you've used to draw the comic in the same quality all throughout, with all the stuff going on in the backgrounds it’s an amazing feet. Your coloring is as perfect as always. The emotions you've added to this piece via questions marks, lines, and thoughts show in words has given a nice emphasis to character personalities and feelings.

A job well done mate!
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well first off i must say that its good to see old series being brought back to life and the way it is done here is incredible,

first of the style of the characters and the way they are drawn is amazing the colour used in the comic is vibrant and stands out, and the background setting are draw beautifully

so overall i think that this comic is beautiful and stunning and i cant wait to see further comics that show off this workmanship and high calibre detailing of the lucky star characters as and when they show up in the upcoming comics
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Axel-DK64 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah, it's very time consuming for me with TAS as well. ;p
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M-i-s-o-S-o-u-p Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Wait what... I don't get it....

:iconideaplz:

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THAR :iconpervyotakuplz:
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GreenChocobo Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
Wark, hahaha it sooo awesome i love it, kagamis expression at the tail end is priceless
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OtakuTiki Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love it!! It turned out so well, i cant wait to see the next page!
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LittleMikoto Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
i LUV LUV LUV lucky star and kagami is my IDOL!
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wildcardsniper Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
after this do silent downpoAR or shattARed memories or umm.... the ARoom ^^ lol
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Lpssparkle123 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HAHA Love
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Girlovestacos1234567 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice, it's good to see Konata sexually harassing Kagami indirectly
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AvoryAzion Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks fun. I'd like to see more...
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MoonwolfYouthOtaku Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh I like where this is going X3
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LittleScavenger Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Mhh, generally good for a start in comics. Let's see what you'll do next, I'm confident on you ^^.
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sindarfrom Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Kagami sure see something pervy in what Konata is doing))) Well, for me it looks pervy as well xD
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AnnakaTan Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
This rules :> very eager to see the rest! :D
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megasean3000 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome :)
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HigurashiForever Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Very nice :icongoodjobplz:
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SymbianL Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
one thing i noticed is that I forgot Konata's eyes and ahoge.
*facepalm*
I'll fix it... How did I miss that!?
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wawatu Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nice , this bring me a smile to my face... keep the good work, greetings for colombia.
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M-i-s-o-S-o-u-p Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student General Artist
Last panel- What... I don't get it.... O_O
OH I SEE WHAT YOU DID THAR :iconiseeplz:
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Kawai-Pregnancy Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
The last panel is so freakin comical! What in Lucky Starts name :o is Konata doing anyways? Giggles :D at the thought that she is playing some odd dating simulator game.
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Stephenlee3 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is Konata rubbing those controllers on her chest?
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SymbianL Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Yes. She is. XD
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BdudeKnight Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
:icongoodjobplz:
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Lucario2008 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
WOW! WELL DONE!
You captured Konata and Kagami perfectly!
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pokemonsander1 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is good and looks just like the anime! good job! ^^
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Axel-DK64 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HAHAHAHAH!!!! :XD:
That was a funny end to this page. ;p
Nice to see your doing a Lucky Star fan comic as well. =D
How is the mystery girl...? :icondatkonataplz: (don't need to answer that =w= )
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Strawb-Ellie Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great art, seems like it's going to be good :)
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Dr-Syn Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
How cute
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TurtwigChampion Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ahahahahaha. This looks like it'll be funny.
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Hail-Lord-Sephiroth Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Ooh, right to left, manga style. Awesome
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MikotoWolfskin Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kawii! Mikoto is so adorable :love:
I think my heart just melted she looks so Lucky Star like :iconawwloveplz:
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SymbianL Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Thanks. XD
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killergoonie Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
can't wait for this. this seems really good and i love the artwork. keep up the good work.
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CPUIceHeart Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
this is pretty well done, i so want to see kagami rage in one of the future panels
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SashikuChan Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
hehehehe~ How silly xD. You did amazingly on the artwork :o It looks like the actual anime :3
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SymbianL Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Thanks :) It's still page one and I still have to make the others XD
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SashikuChan Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
xD yea but you are doing good.
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