First of all, I'd like to say that this is seriously charming! I love the behavior you placed into the characters because it matches the fashion of Lucky Star quite well.
I like the amount of details you've used to draw the comic in the same quality all throughout, with all the stuff going on in the backgrounds it’s an amazing feet. Your coloring is as perfect as always. The emotions you've added to this piece via questions marks, lines, and thoughts show in words has given a nice emphasis to character personalities and feelings.
well first off i must say that its good to see old series being brought back to life and the way it is done here is incredible,
first of the style of the characters and the way they are drawn is amazing the colour used in the comic is vibrant and stands out, and the background setting are draw beautifully
so overall i think that this comic is beautiful and stunning and i cant wait to see further comics that show off this workmanship and high calibre detailing of the lucky star characters as and when they show up in the upcoming comics