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Hairtie - AppleJack

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Well... I finished it. Too bad I didn't finish on the same day though. XD
I dunno about you guys but AJ looks wheey better without her hairtie. Just opinion. :3
This is also on my Tumblr blog too. XD

www.equestriadaily.com/2011/09…

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I decided to look through the "critique me" folder and see if there is anything from forever ago that still needs critiquing.
This piece does a very good job of defining the shapes without solid dark outlines, I can't immediately see anything off with that.

Generally the shading is good, one of AJ's legs looks a little bit too bright where it meets her body, it should be a little more shaded at that spot.

The outline for her left eye (our right) should be behind the snout, but it appears to go over it a little bit, but it is not very noticeable.
Overall very good job.